Monday, February 1, 2010



  1. i think this is a strong concept and approach. you've set the images up well in terms of composition. the dynamic line of the sign is especially strong- and anchors the character in the opposite corner- because it is slightly tilted up into the frame. the location provides a minimal setting, also supportive of composition. i'd like to see more takes/revision of the model's action for each emotion. the last two aren't as clearly expressed in the body language. excellent work and planning.