Friday, October 16, 2009

Hero Haiku

One day I saw her
She was eating strawberries
Holding baby teeth

Night, she flies around
Looking for places to see
Where does she go next?

My hero Toothie
She’s so nice and generous
I hope she’s happy.


  1. amazing, how did your mind think of such a flamboyant haiku?

  2. It really is excellent! You pack a lot of character and emotion that describes both Toothie and narrator in few words. Check for possible typo "looking for place to see"