i think this is a strong concept and approach. you've set the images up well in terms of composition. the dynamic line of the sign is especially strong- and anchors the character in the opposite corner- because it is slightly tilted up into the frame. the location provides a minimal setting, also supportive of composition. i'd like to see more takes/revision of the model's action for each emotion. the last two aren't as clearly expressed in the body language. excellent work and planning.
I recently read a poem by Audre Lorde titled, "A Litany for Survival" The poem's final lines read:
"So it is better to speak
remembering
we were never meant to survive."
These immortal words have inspired me to express myself through writing and I hope that what I say stimulates both resonance and penchant for those who read it.
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i think this is a strong concept and approach. you've set the images up well in terms of composition. the dynamic line of the sign is especially strong- and anchors the character in the opposite corner- because it is slightly tilted up into the frame. the location provides a minimal setting, also supportive of composition. i'd like to see more takes/revision of the model's action for each emotion. the last two aren't as clearly expressed in the body language. excellent work and planning.
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